Final project- Expansion on my definition of hockey
So after staring at this site for two hours I finally have figured out how to do it.
Well I'm Tino, I graduated from the medical magnet at Boca Ciega and I am now a Sophmore at USF. my main interested include ice hockey for the bulls, working out, running, pretty much anything and everything thats included in being healthy. I do not eat fast food or drink soda its horrible for you. Ksaun said she loved gaming, I do too. I will beat anyone in halo. I want to be a physical therapist, but I do not have a major because St. Pete does not offer the major I want. Oh yeah and according to Alyssa I have a ghetto booty hahaha
Check out the Ice Bulls website at www.icebulls.org
TinosBlogPage
What position do you play IceHockey?
Jc
Narrative
After three weeks of thinking about the embarrassment in Atlanta, we were ready. After the entire south laughed at us for losing three games in a row to garbage teams, we were ready. The Icebulls and I were ready to prove to the south and the nation that we still deserved to be the top team in our division. I spent the entire break going through the games in my head, critiquing every stride I took on the ice. Our moment of vengeance had finally arrived. As I strapped on my skates I thought about every team that doubted my ability and my team's ability to perform as a great team should. I had an unusually keen height of sense.I could feel the cold chill piercing through my skin. The smell and taste of sweat left over from previous practices. The music filling the locker room and hallway outside of us. I was ready, we were ready. We all knew what it was going to take to destroy our adversaries on the frigid field.
As I stepped onto the ice I looked up to my dad for some sign of good luck. He gave me the thumbs up and told me to give them hell. (more to come)
Just looked it over, and tweaked a few things. Feel free to change it back. It was fun to picture in my head. Ksaun
03/25/2008
Ian, Josh and My Collaboration on Education Through Regulation
Tino:
please link your definition argument to your homepage (here). This will set you on the road to "refactoring" your page into a capstone statement. What sort of craft (rhetorical tools, transitional writing) will be necessary to forge further connections between your narrative and your definition? Can you find content/ideas for such remixing elsewhere on the wiki?
ShareRiff
yooo, I made a firefox page for you and ian..so you can check it out, it's all direct download links so you will probably find some stuff you like.
Firefox Addons
-vic
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