instead of editing someones narrative ill do that:
It was time for English Comp 1 to start. Everyone was wondering what would be like. i know i was. we stood infront of the door waiting.
it was my first class in five years,my first English class and my first class in an American university, i knew it will be different, but didnt know how.
after the first class i wonder for a long time if i should go back, i didnt know I'll feel that lost. i could barely speak proper English and now i have to write narratives, i dont even know what is a narrative!
"You can write about whatever you want" Trey said "Something that is important to you, or not" he was trying to make it easy for us "write about how you fell last night and hurt your leg". that was chalenging, when someone gives you the freedom to write its dangerous. they are no limits and you strat wonder... "Should i write about one of my first dates with my husbend when i met an old friend of mine in the club and forgot about him till 45 min later when he showed up infront of us, or should i write about my favorit tv show, or about the president candidates or should i just wait till someone else posts something and gives me an example".
the days past by and everyone start writeing. Now that Trey realized that we are capabel of puting the words in a sentence and know how to turn on and of the pc he relaxed. "wiki is a place where you can be yourself when you write, you can post your thoughts and coments on the rest of the calss,or even edit your classmates stories. this is the easiest way for you to learn about each othere. and please dont agree with eachothere to often i would like to se arguments." I couldnt help but wonder, i cant even edit mine stories how am i going to do that with the rest.
he was more antusiastic than us.
TREY: " lets try it. Sara Jane tell me how would you start your narative about you?"
SARA JANE:"why me?... ok.... i play soccere so itll be something about my pasion"
"ok go on, and dont worie there is no limits here"
"As i sat on the bus on the way to the state soccer championship, I thought about how much I had changed since my freshman year. Originally captain of the junior varsity soccer team, I am now one of the starting players for the varsity team. I remember going to the first high school tryout for soccere. i was afraid and intimidate by all the girls and especially the coach. Everyone told me that i would make the varsity team without a problem..."
"Good, you see its just like music, once you strat playing it comes easy without thinking. Now... what do you think about here narrative?" He looked at us trying to get us involved the same way he wanted us to be in the wiki.
KATIE "I think the start is good, but... she told us the end of the story to fast... its only the second row and we already know that she will play for the varsity team, no offense Sara"
"Good, good, this is how we start, go on Katie"
"Maybe she should say something about the end but not reviled it too much"
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