You did an excellent job of putting the reader into an exact situation, and you explained the steps that was taken by the attorney. The way you sucked the reader in enabled the reader to have a good image in his/her head. I also liked the analogies that was used. The way Ian used the attorney not really wanting praise for his work, or a legacy fot that matter. Compared to a offensive lineman doing all the dirty work to protect the quarterback. The Offensive linemen work for the good of the team, and all that matters is the end result of the game. Before reading this I really had never ever actually considered what legal help Dr. King could have received during the Civil Rights Movement.