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Erex's evaluation of KSauns Narrative

Page history last edited by PBworks 15 years, 7 months ago

The story had a good plot and her style of writing kept my attention enough to read the whole story.

The topic of the story, the rivalry between her and her dad, was well defined. She used good imagery in the introduction, so i could picture the setting the story took place in. And the conclusion was excellent. Her only weakness is the grammar and flow of the sentences.

I would give this narrative a B!

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