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I remember a time when my friends and I could hang out at the ice cream shop but ever since the incident, things haven't been the same. It all started after our little league baseball team the Saint Petersburg Sharks had just won the regionals and were headed to the state finals. We had just arrived at ice cream shop to celebrate. While our parents prepared to order our food, Tom Johanson the owner of the shop came over to our table. No one was ready for what he was about to show us. It was an encased autographed baseball signed by the great Willie Mays. Also inside the case was an one of kind Willie Mays baseball card. We were stunned. It was the perfect way to finish the day and had the guys looking forward to the post season. The next morning while I was heading over to my best friend Sam's house before practice, I noticed Officer Lawrence talking with Mr. Johanson. At the time I thought nothing of it. During the next few days of practice I could that Sam wasn't his usual sharp self. Then on the final practice before the big game Sam finally cracked. He had actually stole Mr. Johanson's Willie Mays baseball. I stayed up all night debating with myself on whether or not to turn Sam in. On top of it all I was still worried about the big game coming up! Over the next few days I didn't get a wink of sleep. I didn't know what to say to Sam, since he was my bestfriend. It was the day before the game and none of us wanted to hang out at the shop for fear of being accused. Things weren't normal now that we weren't able to hang out at the shop. Sam and I were misereable we didn't know what to do. On the day of the game our parents announced we would be eating our pregame meal at the ice cream shop and a sudden fear came over Sam and me. Thats when he knew we would needed to come clean. It was the hardest thing I had ever had to do. When we brought back the baseball we included a card which told Mr. Johanson what happened. He unwillingly forgave us. Although we lost the state championship game things eventually returned to normal. Sam and I we were just happy to have our shop back.

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