1101 writingunwriting and the rhythm of words

Composition I takes place in davis 239 TR

yo what's up everyone this is drew, the hippie, jesus (you can pick which one you like). I'm fresh out high school meaning this is my first semester in college. I'm a business econ major and hoping somehow that will help me to get to one of the futures i desire to live, law or professional beach bum. My aim handle is jesuswithatwist, feel free to hit me up anytime.

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i found this while i was doing traffic school i think its pretty funny

Up and down the puppies' hair

Fleas and ticks jump everywhere

'Cause of original sin

Down the hill fell Jack and Jill

And you came tumbling after

'Cause of original sin

Rip away the tears

Drink a hope for happy years

And you may find

A lifetime's passed you by

What would you say

If you a monkey on a string

If you a doggie on a chain

What would you say

I was there when the bear

Ate his head, thought it was a candy

Everyone goes in the end

Knock knock on the door

Who's it for, nobody in here

Look in the mirror my friend

I don't understand at best

I cannot speak for all the rest

But you may find a lifetime's passed you by

Every dog has its day every day has its way

Of being forgotten - "Mom it's my birthday"

What would you say

(Don't drop the big one)

If you a monkey on a string

(Don't cut my life line)

If you a doggie on a chain

(Don't bite the mailman)

What would you say

dave matthews band lyrics

I Woke up got my lazy ass out of bed

I Watered all the rocks growing in my head

I Had a thought...and fell asleep on you...

There I was somewhere West of Tomorrow Land

Flying through the stars just like Peter Pan

I said...Damn this looks too good to be true...

There she goes... my heart again (would you mind rolling over)

I can feel it in the air (something's coming down)

I don't know and I don't care that it's a small world

It's a nice day if you wake up in Disneyland...

It's a nice day when you wake up in Disneyland...

In my dream everybody's got a little house

A dog, a bank account managed by Mickey Mouse

And the only thing we fight about is the Lakers...

In my dream all the pirates down in Neverland

Never get the Hook... they just get a hand

While the crocs sing Superman till we just can't take it...

There she goes... my heart again (do you mind rolling over)

I can feel it in the air (something's coming down)

I don't know and I don't care if it's a small world

It's a nice day when you wake up in Disneyland...

It's a nice day if you wake up in Disneyland...

We can fly away...

I Woke up got my lazy ass out of bed

I Watered all the rocks growing in my head

I Had a thought... and I looked up to see

The sign read the park she's closed today

E-tickets don't work here no more anyway

Where every day's a magic day to be free You see...

It's a nice day when you wake up in Disneyland...

It's a nice day should you wake up in Disneyland...

It's your L.U.C.K.Y. day should you wake up in Disneyland...

It's a nice day should you wake up in Disneyland...

five for fighting lyrics

wordplay

Sweet music video xD

Jc

AWESOME!! They are really good. Do they have a CD out or anything??

Sara Jane

I love the rhymes, Drew. Do you sing your poetry?

ShareRiff

what we learned on thursday

Remember (my lyrics)

Well I remember when

you and I would run

run away from the evils of this world

run away from the hell we live in

I walked past you in the hall

I slipped tripped and fell in love

because you were the only one who believed me

your brown eyes I could stare into for days

and never get bored and

then one day I turned around and you were gone

we would run

down by the ocean

we dove headfirst in

ran down the sandy beach

hand in hand

laid on the soft white sand

you laid your pretty head on my chest

we watched the sun set

watched every star rise

our love would last til each star died

baby remember when I loved you

baby remember when you loved me

listen to the rhythm of my heartbeat it only beats for you

listen to the rhythm of my heartbeat it says I love you

I miss your touch

I miss those soft lips

pressed up against mine no matter what

If I had a bad day you knew how to fix it

if I had a perfect day you knew how to make it better

you were my world

We would run down by the ocean

we dove head first in

ran down the sandy beach hand in hand

laid down in the soft white sand

you laid your pretty head on my chest

We watched the sun set

We watched every star rise

Our love would last til each star died

Please remember

Please remember

Please remember me.

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This shows that a good bass can carry any group of instruments to a good sound. The piano is a little soft but when the bass and drums fall out the guitar and piano are left there just jammin away.